JCash3000 - Comments

I've not seen any reliable source reporting a deal with Bayern is done, in fact almost everywhere is carrying Dortmund's statement from last night that they are hopeful of keeping him at the club.

Really?

I'd imagine there would be a bit of shit storm if that was the case considering he's still under contract with Dortmund and they've not given Bayern permission to speak with Lewandowski.

So what you've essentially said is no deal is done because Bayern had a bid rejected?

Eriksen seems almost certain to be heading to Dortmund. Would fit in perfectly too

Dammit, forgot to set my alarm, didn't manage to catch the match.

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One sentence synopsis of the story
150-300 word outline of the stories contents and arc
Title, word count and genre
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Never call the agent to confirm it's okay to send your query, they won't take your call.

And it's a total waste to send your query to a publisher, here's a photo of the slush pile of manuscripts that get sent to a publishing house. Good luck getting read within a year in this:



As usual, JCash3000 is the ultimate faggot.

I agree completely. Basically the only books with the word retard in them are French books, I've got a few ideas in my mind but I'm not fretting abut it right now until the thing is finished.

I've thought up, what I think is, a good storyline for my second novel so the plan is to try and shop this one when it is complete, while writing the second. If the first doesn't sell, I'll try selling the second, and if that doesn't sell either the I will go down the self publishing route while writing a third book. The general rule of thumb with self publishing is to have at least three books so you can offer free days on one book in order to drive sales of the others. I've been doing a fair amount of reading up on it and it'll mean having to start a blog, be active on Twitter, Goodreads etc.

4-1.

Germans dominating Europe again, this didn't end well last time

Whilst that's true they're either blind or fucking retarded.

The foul on Alba right in front of him is another in a long, long line of fucking shite 'decisions' by those officials.

I'm gonna give him the benefit of the doubt and assume that he does.

Definitely need to change the title, some people will be very put off by it instantly and I doubt any credible publisher will release a book called that.

I'd argue that Bayern's transfer policy is not to dissimilar from Manchester City, and that the only real difference is that Bayern are by far and away the most powerful club in Germany, whilst City can't express the same sort of authority in the Premier League because of the presence of United, Chelsea and, to a lesser extent, Arsenal and Liverpool. Bayern are wanting to strengthen their squad each summer just as City do, except they're able to do so with greater ease due to their superior stature and finances in comparison with the Bundesliga. It seems to be an issue with the different dynamics of the Premier League and the Bundesliga, rather than differing transfer policies between Bayern and City. As I said before, City would be perfectly comfortable buying from their rivals and undermining the growth of the league if they were able to do so, but they can't due to other big teams in England.

With regards to your second point, you can go ahead and include Gael Clichy's transfer as well Nasri's as he was an important part of our side when you bought him. Furthermore, you certainly tried to get John Terry as I previously said, even if you eventually failed and he signed a new contract with Chelsea. Also, are Schalke and Stuttgart even realistic contenders for the Bundesliga? Not consistently, anyway. If you're going to use the signings of Neuer and Gomez as examples of Bayern trying to weaken the opposition and stifle the growth of the league, it's fair to compare your acquisitions of Gareth Barry and James Milner when Aston Villa were still a side pushing for Europe, along with signing Joleon Lescott and Jack Rodwell from Everton. If you're going to mention Bayern buying from Stuttgart and Schalke then I'd say it's more than fair enough to compare that to City purchasing players from Aston Villa and Everton.

Bayern are going to have some unbelievable squad.

Time to invest in a Dortmund jersey with Dzeko on the back