JCash3000 - Comments

hardly interesting story. sounds like the usual teenager stuff, nothing innovative and therefore unmarketable.
this exposé is far too short also.
The exposé should be a short but complete resumé of the plot and the characters. no cliffhangers or shit like that.
maybe you can add a comparison to works from other authors.
I dont think any agent/publisher will buy this in this form unless you change it and put in something unique (maybe you already got something unique in it, correct me if im wrong, but it doesnt show in your exposé and thats what the agent reads).


Or maybe you could call your book "JCash3000 is the ultimate faggot." to push sales
Good luck though

Some tips that may be helpful:
its never a good idea to blindly send scripts to publishers or their agents.
find the right publisher which corresponds/suits to your book/story (pretty obvious i guess but nevertheless).
Its common to contact the agent/publisher first (phone/email) and check if he is interested.
If he is, you will be asked to send some 20 pages of your scipt as a probe and an exposé of about 3 pages (and a CV maybe also).
If they like it you will be asked to send the whole manuscript.
Then they will decide.
Note: Agents dont like it if you just send them scripts. They will throw them in the bin at once.

then again, you could say the same about city in english football.
in terms of buying players from same division clubs to make them weaker because they got all the money they dont differ too much.
or what is it why you label them "cancer"?

Sad but thats the way the business works. Wish him all the best, he´s got a bright future ahead of him.

Heynckes always fancies Spain anyway. he knows the spanish language perfectly, has got a residence there and wouldnt have to adapt having worked there for quite some time. england would be a bit far fetched tbh. he doesnt need a "challenge" anymore in his age and he doesnt need any money anymore either. so if he ever goes into a job again, it will be in germany (some club in the Niederrhein area where he originates from) or spain.

Yeah , Gomez and Robben got no future at Bayern anymore, so off with them.
Pretty sure now Bayern will make a move for Hummels as well soon

Well, those were nice 3 past seasons. We will remember them in 20 years time because from now on its mediocrity again.

Perfect moment to announce that, Bayern. Perfect!
Bayern should better be keeping an eye on their in-trouble president than trying to make a young player a hate target for his own fans in his own stadium before the biggest game of his career...
The common fansites are already filled with hate , labelling him a "traitor" and so on.
Pretty sure he will crumble on wednesday for he is not known for his good nerves. Klopp shouldnt let him play imo.
Thank you, Bayern. Thank you for ruining our CL final dream. I truly hate you.

Anyway IF thats true, then welcome Edin Dzeko to the Westfalenstadion

Congrats Man Utd for a great season

Congratulations for the championship, Manchester United. Well done

I dont give a f.ck anyway for what happens at Liverpool, theyre not our level

I am not biting others in the arm in a football match

I wonder if he even knew what "Hillsborough" is before he was told to donate his fine to it today...

Come on, FCB!!!

Fantastic goal from Pod - go Arsenal!

Cheater.
Then again, hes used to it aint he? ask his girls

16 years ago, exactly
We failed in the CL miserably last season.
we went 1st in our group this time, yes but we didnt have the best of opponents on our way to the sf with Shaktar and Malaga.
Anyway.

because we are not an established club in european football and we havent won a thing for a long time there.
we are not a football "heavy weight" like them.
anyway, i thought it would be a lovely comic and something to smile about.

Same 3 clubs as last year in the semis.
Dortmund not the favorite here.
I posted a comical picture here but removed it, seemed to be inappropriate.

its ok.

i edited a to a to make it CLEARER to someone like you who cant tell this wasnt meant seriously despite me using a "" before, yes.
Im sorry I really didnt know you take posts seriously when theres a "" after it..

At the latest when i introduced the "Malaga Qatari" it was clear to normal brains that this was a joke.

I cant believe you can be this stupid to not understand a ""...

Of course!

UEFA just changed their plan.
They think they will get more out of a Barca-Real final, thats the simple explanation.
And the Malaga Qatari guy is in there too im sure!
I didnt think that far when i wrote the above post.

Bayern-Barca
BVB-Real

Surprised to be honest.
But then again, UEFA want a el clasico final of course

so watch out, Chelsea! The swiss aint that cheesy anymore!

Langer is STILL playing?!??

Last may in munich it was the other way round and that was called the "class" of Chelsea...

Dortmund IS awesome

Thats exacty how the draw on friday will be. 2 different nations in the final then.
UEFA (Platini) wont let one nations tv money run through their fingers, thats for sure.
They dont even have to draw it, its already decided by money.

Malagas goal was WAY offside as well.
So not harsh on Malaga at all, just a deserved outcome of this tie.
It wouldve been harsh on Dortmund if Malaga won it.
Reus and Götze already wouldve made it 3-1 to Dortmund if Willy hadnt had the best game of his life (he will never be THAT good again in his career im sure).
So...
Malaga never deserved to win this tie - the better team won this time, for once.

A good day for the beautiful football

Rightly so. This guy is the worst ref on earth.
Trust me, I watch him almost every week on the pitch.