@gomu, the previous cuts for this guy are of superior quality so this isn't really an improvement, I'm afraid.

Also, please remember that all cuts must have a collar.

Since in some sources, like presumably this one, the person in the image has a longer neck than usual or the collar is lower down, the above would be quite difficult to achieve naturally. 

Here's a technique of how the above can be accomplished quite easily by lassoing the collar and nudging it upwards:

I'll fix this one myself but please remember this for any future cuts.