Sorry, the first one is not cut out. Use the second one, please.

Not a bad cut, but all cuts should have a collar and images should be rotated before being cropped…

By collar you mean a visible part of the clothes? 

Yes, this:

This is what I mean by rotating the image:

It's great that you want to contribute cuts, and it's otherwise pretty good, so do take the time to have a look at the guidelines 👍