Hi @Sajzik., not a bad cut at all but we prefer to have as little space left as possible between the bottom of the chin and the bottom of the cut. This in order for as much focus to be on the face as possible. Also, we try to have cuts as vertical as possible rather than slanting. I've given it a quick go myself so you can see what I mean:



Hope we see some more work from you in the future - do keep in mind the guidelines in this thread in mind if you decide to do so