Improvement*

Good work. Could do with a bit of brightening and removing the snow from the hair, but otherwise a very solid start

Thanks, i applied your advice and reworked on it

Better, but there's still a little bit of snow in the hair. No worries, I'll fix it, but just keep it in mind for any future cuts

Also, if you're uploading batches of cuts, it's much more time-effective if you upload them in a mixpack instead of individually. Saves me having to download them all individually too