Not a bad start at all @lacme31.

As I referred to in my previous post and as outlined in the guidelines thread I linked you to, all cuts must include a collar and every cut must be cropped to within 2-3 pixels of the chin.

Since in some sources, like this one, the person in the image may have a longer neck than usual or the collar is lower down, the above would be quite difficult to achieve naturally. Here's a technique of how this can be accomplished quite easily:

I'll fix this one myself, but please make sure to use it for all such cuts in the future 👍

Hey @mons 

I modified the photo of Stephane Zobo

it's ok ? 

You've cropped it closer to the chin, but still no collar 😕

Also, try to leave no more than 2-3 pixels of empty space above the head 👍