@TehransVeryOwn, in addition to what I told you in the previous post, I would suggest rotating sources a little bit, to make sure that the face should be straight-on, rather than slanting or at angle; i.e. the eyes are ideally in a straight line and parallel to the top or bottom of the cut.

Also, since you're still starting out, and before you start uploading packs, can you post your draft cuts in the tutorials thread for feedback 😉