@Joe Moon , if you want to upload a new version of a cut you've just uploaded, please avoid making an immediate submission just after. Post it in the comment of the original request and tag me if necessary

Also, I don't know if it's because of the source, but avoid having shoulders cut off in the middle of a cut, it just doesn't look natural. Use clone stamp to "extend" them, if need be



Finally, before starting to crop the source image, in cases like this one it'd be better if you rotated it so it'd be more straight. In this source, 4-5 degrees clockwise would have been ideal.

Keep up the good work