@JoeMoon1506, not a bad effort from not an easy source.

However, there is still a bit of grey snow in the hair details and please remember not to cut-off the shoulders before the full width of the cut is reached. I've made some modifications accordingly and kept the old version for ease of comparison:

https://imgur.com/a/XexMyCt

Also, when the face is slightly slanting to one side, it would be better if before starting the cut you rotated the source so that it's as perpendicular as possible. 3-4 degrees clockwise in this case would have been sufficient. Now that it's been cropped already, rotating it would leave a gap, so I couldn't do it in this case.

thanks @mons