@Draskulla The cut contains some snow around the head, and as @mons said, there is no need to leave such a large space above the hair.

Sorry, I had made that before Mons told me about the snow and the space above the head

@Draskulla, do avoid leaving such a large gap above the head if possible. Also, if you view it on a dark background, it contains snow all across the hair. There's a video in the thread I linked you to earlier on how to spot and remove snow quickly; do give it a look

Here's my version:

Edit: just seen the conversation above me

I'll re-open this since we need best possible cut.