Good work @philip 

Just a minor point. When nudging the collar upwards, all you need to include in the cut is a small bit at the neck. When nudging it, make sure only the collar is displayed when you crop it, to avoid the guy looking a bit hunched.

Here's what I mean, in pictures: https://sortitoutsi.net/content/360/guide-to-cutting-and-assorted-hints-tips-and-assistance?page=21#comment_529714 

Also, this cut and some others in this pack had a bit of snow. Do keep an eye out for it 👍